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From my perspective, I’m definitely in support of allocating more government resourcesincreasing government resources allocation and attention to education. I agree with Andrew’s idea that education can raise people’s awareness of environment protection. I’d also further add thatFurthermore the deterioration of the environment takes long however education brings fast impact. For example, when I was in my primary school, my teacher taught us how plastic bags jeopardize the natureendanger the environment and render mortality ofcause harm to animals. As soon as I learned it, I started to reuse plastic bags, and put those on the street in the dustbin, thus make an immediate contribution toimmediately contribute to the environment. Moreover, as applied chemistry developsadvancements in applied chemistry, easy-resolute plastic bagseasily degradable plastic bags are created, which decrease the environmental pollution by a large marginsignificantly reduce environmental pollution.